logo        Hist 350  Fall 2018  

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WRITING ASSIGNMENTS


Hist 350--

In this AW course, you will be developing a full-fledged research paper. We will go about this by stages, and there will be much attention in class to writing issues. We will discuss this in much more detail, but the stages of paper development will look like this:

Annotated Bibliography

Research Proposal
First Draft of the Paper
Final Draft of the Paper

(due dates for these papers are in the syllabus schedule)

First, it is important to know exactly what a research paper in history is. For our purposes, a research project for writing history at this level must aim at more than just a recounting of events. The paper must deal with the meaning of a chosen episode or topic. Hence, you will be putting together an account of some event, or trend, or idea, or theme, but you will also aim to decode or explain the topic you have chosen. Many historians will tell you that the "What" question of a research paper must be accompanied by the question "So What?" What makes your topic important, historically significant?  What does your conclusion lead you to posit? What is the meaning of the "story" or "profile" you have put together.

A research project of any kind is always divided into several stages. The most basic division is easy: research vs. writing. But the sophistication of a real research paper in history at the upper-level makes it necessary for you to break down the project into even more divisions.  And this same sophistication needed to produce such a paper will require you to be extremely intentional with your METHODS of research and writing.

The first stage of your journey will be to select a topic. This is tricky business.  The topic has to be within our course subject matter, naturally. But at this point, you don't know the things we will study, since you haven't had the full course yet! So you have to triangulate, to listen carefully and ask questions when we talk about topics in class and individually, to look over the whole syllabus carefully, and to think about what kinds of sources are out there.

Next, you will produce an extensive Annotated Bibliography.  This will consist of far more than just listing a few sources. For one thing, it will require you to find both primary and secondary materials. We will discuss the meaning of these categories in class. It will also require you to cover the ground for the topic you choose. You must not be satisfied with a primary source and a few secondary articles. You must produce a list of all the writing you can find that touches on your topic. And for the purposes of the assigned bibliography, you have to do with a topic in mind. Complicated?  Yes. Difficult? Yes. But finding out a multiplicity of sources and approaches is crucial. This process will lead you to think about your topic and craft your own examination of it.

Quick note on the preceding: if you can't find primary sources for your topic, you can't write a paper successfully. This means, for this course and most courses, that you are better off to start by finding some fund of primary sources and peruse those to see if they "suggest" a topic that "speaks" to you. Again, we will go over this in class.

The second stage is to write a proposal. This will include a hard and practical decision about exactly what you intend to write about. We are no longer look at "The Battle of the Bulge" or "Queen Elizabeth I." We are looking to define a very specific episode or aspect and explore it thoroughly. So as opposed to the previous two general topics, you will looking for something like "German Covert Measures During the Battle of the Bulge" or "The Tax Policies of Queen Elizabeth I."  Just examples.

The next stage is the drafting of the paper. We will be talking a lot about the specific form of the paper in class. But for now, think hard about how one can keep track of multiple sources, evaluate the primary sources, develop ideas about the topic... and write it all in a coherent, readable form! You must have a good method for this, and we will talk about some useable methods in class.

The final stage is the editing and revision of your first draft. That first draft should "perfect"!  But after you have some time to think about and to read my comments, and perhaps talk to me about it, you will see that you can improve your writing, clarify your ideas, and sharpen the paper a great deal. 


Requirements:

Annotated Bibliography  As indicated above, this should be substantial. Try to find everything relevant. If I read your bibliography and immediately list ten or twelve major sources you missed, you will have to do this over.  And if your sources are all over the place, I will likewise insist on rewriting for more focus. For each source, you will need to have read or skimmed enough to comment on the contents and on what the contents might do for your future project.  The lengths of these will vary, but I can imagine a six- or eight-page paper for this assignment.  You must use a bibiographical electronic tool to keep track of your ressearch. I strongly recommend Zotero, a free bibliography tool created by historians for historians.  Download it here:  https://www.zotero.org/
        You will find that this, or some similar tool, will up your game by a magnitude from the very start. This is not optional.


Research Proposal  This proposal must include:
        A long statement of the topic
        A discussion of where the topic will lead you and a prediction of where you will end up
        A statement of the feasibility of your project, given the sources and time available
        A tentative title for your paper
        And an improved version of your Annotated Bibliography must be the final section

(note: everything but the actual biographical entries should be double-spaced. And you must number the pages.)

First Draft of the Paper  The paper must be typed, double-spaced. Your Turnitin version must be in final form--don't leave editing tasks for me to do before I read it. It must be properly paginated (you must number the pages correctly). It must have a cover page with title, date, class title, etc.  You must check it carefully, both electronically and other ways, for spelling, continuity, grammatical correctness, etc. 
    It must contain footnotes or endnotes in the style we discuss in class. It must end with a complete bibliography with no annotations. The bibliography means: ONLY the sources you actually footnoted in the paper.
    You must make the sections of the paper clear: use subtitles or spaces to delineate the end of the introduction and the beginning of the first section, and so on throughout the paper.
    You should check it against the overuse of the passive voice and the verb to be.
    It must have a solid introduction and conclusion. 
   
Final Draft of the Paper This work will be revising and editing both in light of my own marks on the first draft and on the basis of newer ideas you have had, or ideas you have gained from your fellow class members. 


We will be discussing methods for drafting the paper in class at great length. You will need to adopt a careful and thought-out method, such as using notecards, or a ring binder, and using this method in a coherent and detailed way. The "hit-or-miss" method will not be allowed.



This list might give you a sense of the level of grammatical and stylistic level at which I will be looking at your paper:
EXAM AND PAPER EVALUATION SHEET



GENERAL INSTRUCTIONS FOR ALL PAPERS

You must use proper English and complete sentences.   DO NOT USE INTERNAL CITATION SUCH AS MLA STYLE.  All references, if you use any for this assignment, should be in the footnote/endnote style.  Please see the following site for a complete description of footnote style:

http://www.wisc.edu/writing/Handbook/DocChicago.html
     
(NOTE ON PLAGIARISM:  Plagiarism is so easy with electronic sources, that I want to make clear my stance on it. If you simply rewrite slightly some source you found on the internet (or in print for that matter), that constitutes plagiarism.  If I discover this, you will receive an F for this course, and I will report the case to the Dean and the appropriate conduct organs.  I may not catch all cases of plagiarism, but I promise to give immediate and full attention to those I do.  Give full credit for an idea, for any information that goes beyond common knowledge, for someone's words, for someone's brainchild, etc.  Otherwise you are being dishonest. )
 
Other Important Issues:
    ALWAYS number your pages
    Don't turn in anything to anybody that looks half-baked.
    In quoting, remember to TAG or attribute your quotations in the text:  don't just rely on the footnote to give that information to the reader.
    You can make your writing strongly immediately by revising out all the verbs in the passive voice and most of the uses of the verb to be.